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Video I did for my TV Production college class. Very funny. 
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Post Video I did for my TV Production college class. Very funny.
Tell me what you think about it. It's a supposed to be a commercial. It's based off of a real prank, THE PEN15 CLUB, and I added to it with another joke. It was my script and idea. It's only 1:00 minute long. Not long. It's very funny.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OwI3cqMYcq0

Tell me what you think if you watch it please. Thank you. Also, I hope girls won't be offended by the joke I used in it. If they are, sorry.


Tue Feb 17, 2009 3:31 pm
Post Re: Video I did for my TV Production college class. Very funny.
If you've watched it, please tell me what you think about it. Thank you.


Wed Feb 18, 2009 8:05 pm
Post Re: Video I did for my TV Production college class. Very funny.
Over 20 views and not a single reply. I was hoping for some opinions on it, as in replies on whether it's funny or not. Not a single one though.

Ok I guess.


Fri Feb 20, 2009 1:30 am
Post Re: Video I did for my TV Production college class. Very funny.
Constructively, you probably shouldn't reveal the joke before people see the video. Pen15 is not hard decipher. The video then becomes the vagina, which isn't really a joke. It's a shock/graphic word coerced to fit your mnemonic. Also, assuming you've concealed the joke until the 'reveal,' the reveal should be better executed. It was difficult to see the writing. Finally, I don't think this is the forum to be looking for feedback for college/ametuer projects.


Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:12 pm
Post Re: Video I did for my TV Production college class. Very funny.
I saw the pen15 moniker and deemed it unsafe for work, and I'm the boss.


Fri Feb 20, 2009 6:18 pm
Post Re: Video I did for my TV Production college class. Very funny.
Unsafe for work, as in on a message board?...Ok...


Fri Feb 20, 2009 6:26 pm
Post Re: Video I did for my TV Production college class. Very funny.
R.O.U.S. wrote:
Unsafe for work, as in on a message board?...Ok...


Something that may contain material of a sexual or gender-insulting nature. -As in, wouldn't want a female employee looking over my shoulder as I viewed it.

Since then, I've viewed this vid at home. Turns out, I was right. How 'bout that.


Comments:
It appears to be a well-built news room set with decent lighting and fairly good quality graphic insert capabilites... uh, that's all I have to say about that...


Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:42 am
Post Re: Video I did for my TV Production college class. Very funny.
Awf Hand wrote:
R.O.U.S. wrote:
Unsafe for work, as in on a message board?...Ok...


Something that may contain material of a sexual or gender-insulting nature. -As in, wouldn't want a female employee looking over my shoulder as I viewed it.

Since then, I've viewed this vid at home. Turns out, I was right. How 'bout that.


Comments:
It appears to be a well-built news room set with decent lighting and fairly good quality graphic insert capabilites... uh, that's all I have to say about that...


I said in my first post that I hope girls won't be offended by a joke I use. With me saying that, there is obviously a joke in there that can be thought of as sexual before it's heard. If anything, watch it at home, that way there is no problem. Obviously since I mentioned its about the PEN15 CLUB, it obviously has a sexual joke in it. Obviously it's not an appropriate thing for any poster to watch at work. I didn't think any poster would watch it at work. Hopefully you understand that....


Sat Feb 21, 2009 4:17 pm
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